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For this project, I chose to write my own children’s picture book and work it up into a pitch I could send to agents and publishers.

WHAT IS A PICTURE BOOK PITCH ?

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​https://write-mentor.com/courses/community-learning-hub-online-modules/lessons/1-7-introduction-to-childrens-fiction-pitching-picture-books/

HOW TO

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Examples of published books with their pitch


WRITING THE STORY

3 act story structure 

​https://gallery.mailchimp.com/a761264f84ac176a17ff801a3/files/fa86076d-edd7-4476-8112-3e2ac501536d/3_ACT_STORY_STRUCTURE_PRINTABLE.pdf
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What is the book about and who is it for? 

Target audience is for a more mature child, at least 7-9 as the subject is quite complex.

I’ve had my younger self at the center of my mind during the entire realisation of this project.
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YouTube instead of buying the books

HOW TO APPROACH ANXIETY 

Alan Watts

​https://alanwatts.org/


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Science Says it WORKS!

​https://link.springer.com/article/10.1007/s12671-015-0424-5
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​https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/25546595/

My research was extensive on theses subjects and maybe not necessary to include it all.


OLOGIES

However, I must include some episodes from the amazing podcast Ologies. It has quite literally changed my life in a number of ways and it’s informing a great deal with this project.

FEAR
https://www.alieward.com/ologies/fearology-pt-1?rq=Fearology
https://www.alieward.com/ologies/fearology-pt-2?rq=Fearology

ADHD
https://www.alieward.com/ologies/adhd
https://www.alieward.com/ologies/adhd2

PAIN
https://www.alieward.com/ologies/dolorology

HAPPINESS 
https://www.alieward.com/ologies/eudemonology

PROCRASTINATION 
​​https://www.alieward.com/ologies/procrastination

GRATITUDE
https://www.alieward.com/ologies/awesomeology

THE ATTICUS ADVENTURES 

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Pinterest inspo

VISUAL RESEARCH

From very early on in the research and the development of this story, I have been drawn to the idea that the main character meets a winged lion who teaches him to calm his mind.

(more on this later)

Deciding on size 

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The closest I could find on Mixam was 21.6x27.9cm, not ideal
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​https://www.bookdesignmadesimple.com/design-a-childrens-picture-book/
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8x10 inches - 20.3x25.4 cm

Not forgetting to add extra space for the bleed as with the Jungle Book project. 

COLOUR PALETTES 

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https://www.webmd.com/balance/what-are-chakras

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https://www.healthline.com/health/fitness-exercise/7-chakras#Chakra-101
Hidden meaning in colours.

We know that colour theory is key in creating good designs but is there a spiritual element that can be incorporated to create a deeper meaning hidden within the images? 

THUMBNAILS 


Finding more inspiration 

Saun Tan

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https://www.shauntan.net/dog-book
‘’No matter what future meets our planet, no matter how transformed or tragic, even apocalyptic, it’s hard to imagine that a dog will not be there by our side, always urging us forward.”
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Pavel Tatarnikov
​http://tatarnikov.com/en/illustrations.html

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Serena Malyon

​https://www.instagram.com/smalyon/
Lily Seika Jones

​https://www.lilyseikajones.com/
Susan Seddon-Boulet

THE LION AND THE DOG

Looking deeper into the symbolism of the lion I came across some pertinent stuff.
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​https://www.uniguide.com/lion-meaning-symbolism-spirit-animal-guide#
More on Milarepa here: ​https://www.lionsroar.com/the-life-of-milarepa/
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SURREALIST EXPERIMENT 

Other than using a reference photo for the lioness and Atticus, I let my imagination do the rest. Letting inks mix naturally, creating texture with salt. 

Location scouting 

I needed get reference pictures of Atticus in a cave as this is where he spends the biggest part of the story. So I took a trip into the Lake District and rented a Yurt for a night. This is a cave up Castle Crag. I also got video footage to freeze frame and use as reference pictures. 

POTENTIAL PUBLISHERS 

Jellycat

Jellycat has a younger target audience however I really like the soft toy that accompanies the book.
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I went ahead and bought this book for its leading industry advice and contacts.
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I worked each thumbnail up into a very rough illustration on procreate and then I placed text over the image.
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OUTCOMES


THE LOGLINE

​“When a fearful dog steps into another world, he learns to face his fears with a new mindfulness technique, taught to him by a mythical creature.”

THE DUMMY

I will not be presenting the pitch to publishers yet, but I will endeavour to send it for professional feedback.

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Thank you !

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